On sunday I got hit by a car in the carpark. I felt so sad I wanted to go home so we went home and check if I got any pain. I lie down and read a book. the end by renee
In the weekend I went to tt hutt with my famliy my daddy got the viedcamer from the back of the car he vied my family and me my daddy ski with the viedcamer we went to lunch and my family went home with me the end.
I with tabow aran the wnmt wnsa aveh it wert see jpam in myabch and i can goto dsneie ianmi at jpam itwil be cool and i wil goto oklen to the siy tawmk and iwnw and i wen go to weakl i can go to anenene wawe in my adventure
I will travel around the world with my adventure. I would see Japan in my adventure and I can go to Disneyland. In Japan it will be cool and I will go to Auckland to the Sky Tower and I will go to Wellington. I can go to anywhere in my adventure.
Each week some of the children will post their independent writing here. They will do their best with spelling, punctuation and grammar. Hopefully you will see a huge improvement in their writing over the year.