Phew! I was near the finish line. I felt like I was riding a motorbike. I stretched out for the finish line. I made it. My Dad raced up to me and gave me a big hug. I was sixth.
The smoning WE mad a Spider slider We yuosed a pice of striing and cared bord and a strow.
on sunday i went fishing with my dad we sor sum fish but we dedt kach ener fish at all we sor a play boat and it was a mote control. we played on the play park.
Each week some of the children will post their independent writing here. They will do their best with spelling, punctuation and grammar. Hopefully you will see a huge improvement in their writing over the year.