In the weekend I went to the riccarton mart we had luch ther I went on a ride it was aballoon pump then I went on a horss ther were two horss ther nams are pach and bannt I rided bannt I found some gold and some loys and they gave me pice of cake it was nice cake I wanted some more because it was so nice .Then we whent home and I had a sandwich it was yam The END.
In the holedays. I went to my frinds house she had a litle brother. I stad the nigt. In the mroing I had some serall. we sated playing then
It was A cold day. we had to rap our salves up. we had a walk around the ecodepot. we had to rip some strips and we had to put it in the water to make a worm farm.
I think the boys should be banned from the Back field Because they get all mudy.
Each week some of the children will post their independent writing here. They will do their best with spelling, punctuation and grammar. Hopefully you will see a huge improvement in their writing over the year.